Monday, January 09, 2006

2099 இல் ஒரு நாள்

காலையில் உலகத்தில் விழித்து,
மாத்திரை உண்டு,
ஆக்ஸிஜன் ட்யூப் அணிந்து,
பள்ளிக்குச் சென்றால்,
ரோபோக்கள் பாடம் நடத்த,
நாங்கள் பிரம்படிக்காக ஏங்கினோம்..
மாலையில் மறுபடி குழாய் அணிந்து,
காற்று வாகனத்தில் பறந்து,
நிலவை அடைந்தால்,
அங்கேயோ காதலர் கூட்டம்
கம்புயூட்டர் தீர்ப்புப் படி
பொய் காதல் சொல்ல,
நாங்கள் ரோஜாவிற்கு ஏங்கினோம்.
இப்படி முகமூடி அணிந்து,
பொய் முகத்தோடு வாழும்,
2099 விட,
1999 தான்
மகிழ்ச்சிக் காலம்.


I wrote this poem when i was in college back in 1999. Though its not a very good one, i jus consider this one as a good try. i would also post the one which was published in my college magazine in my next post.

9 comments:

Balaji S Rajan said...

That is quite a good one. Good thinking. True... sometimes you really hate too much of this modernisation. There was more life in those things is the kind of feeling you get.

Ajay said...

hey i am the first 1 to comment... hehehe din understand a single word.... could c only some round and round...hehe tamil is tough to write i think

Ram said...

Gud thought,to be frank the tamil is not so rich but the content is great and thought provoking. Keep it up.

வேதா said...

@mr.balaji,
thanks. sometimes we get fed up with the modernisation, though we have to lead our life with that.

@ajay,
what are u trying to say? i dont get it!!

@ram,
thanks.

Raju said...

Romba arumaiyaana kavithai..

If you think the way 'love' has changed over the last 30 years, anything can happen in the near future.. sirippadha azhuvadhaa?

வேதா said...

@raju,
thanks for ur comment, keep visiting

Sundar Narayanan said...

ore fatalistic-a irukke...

:)

but nice one.

வேதா said...

@sundar,
thanks keep visiting.

Delhi_tamilan said...

well, if you are still wondering what ajay had tell you, is that he couldn't see the tamil fonts in his Internet browser and he thought you have done it intentionally, i hope he must have realized by now that his browser settings just didn't support to show tamil language (ama.. am i too late to respond to it.. do u really recollect what am i talking here!)